Many people believe that greed, or the desire to have more wealth than other people have, is a bad characteristic; people who are greedy are often considered selfish or unkind. However, some people argue that greed is actually a good characteristic for a person to have because greedy people will work harder than others to become successful. Do you believe that greed can be a good characteristic? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Someone has rightly said that greed can lead to a destruction a person hilmself and that of those surrounding him. Greed is a bad characteristic and in no way should be considered as good characteristic.
Greedy person may work harder to become successful, but greedy person are much concerned about acquiring wealth and achieving success rather than the path they follow to achieve success. They don't care how they achieve success they just want to become successful. This can have effect on other people life. For example, there are businessmen who traps innocent poor people in traps and made them work more and pay less. There are lot of industrialist who have installed cheap chimneys that affects environment harmfully.
Moreover, Greedy people are never satisfied they want even more and more. Greedy people are never internally satisfied. So, by working hard they are achieving success and materilaistic things, but it do no benefit to their inner satisfaction. For example, we have many succesful people becoming depressed and leaving their job or business to go in rehab.
Furthermore, Greedy people can fall to traps, can fall prey to cheats. Greedy people want to achieve wealth and success as fast as they can in whichever way. Sometimes they are in a hurry and in greed to achieve things and can fall prey to cheats. For example, many greedy fall prey to a cheat company as they fooled people that they will double money for double work. Greedy people infatuated by the offer, does not pay attention to all the information regarding the company, later on they found out that company was a fraud and they did extra work for no money.
Additionally, greedy people are more concerned about money and they do enjoy other pleasures of life. Pleasure like spending quality time with family and friends.
So i think greed acts as more of a hindrance for achieving wealth as well as internal peace.
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...uccess and materilaistic things, but it do no benefit to their inner satisfaction....
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...lity time with family and friends. So i think greed acts as more of a hindrance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, for example, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01242236025 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62265563801 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531055900621 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5786960572 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9473684211 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9473684211 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73684210526 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325521365972 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118403835208 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075921930742 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171737398435 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415145330911 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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