The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015
As can be seen from the maps, Fosbury city's maps which are illustrating huge changes in city's structure are shown in 1980 and 2015.
To overview, the town in 1980 had been provided more green areas compared with the map in 2015, representing a modern industrialised city and equipped with packed facilities for a wide range of requirements.
During these 35 years, an enormous square had been added to the heart of the city and two narrow ways to the town sides alike. Although the location of the hotel had been unchanged since 1980, the grocer's shop, block of flats, and terraced homes in the nearby are replaced by a large car parking plus a supermarket. Additionally, two tennis courts in the south west of the city are facilitated as a sport centre for diverse games like football, basketball, and tennis the oldest sport in this region.
On the other hand, the natural views in the town have been reduced considerably between 1980 and 2015. According to the maps, the vast field of the city has been devoted to warehouses since 2015. Moreover, terraced buildings are moved to the western part of the city, where the old park was located. However the new park is situated in an bare flat across the street, it is not as wide as the old one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 301, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...e city, where the old park was located. However the new park is situated in an bare fla...
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Line 13, column 337, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ed. However the new park is situated in an bare flat across the street, it is not ...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... not as wide as the old one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73423423423 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51958081368 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603603603604 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5917845639 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.777777778 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214344907429 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838308731253 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852054359958 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142292118617 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642476089546 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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