Education used to be a short period of training, but today, people treat it like a lifelong practice. Do you agree or disagree?
Education is a big concern for many people, so there are many ideas about how to learn? It is true that Increasingly people choose learning throughout life. I completely agree with the idea that education is more likely to be a lifelong pursuit, rather than an isolated practice in the century to come.
It is clear that, learning conditions and opportunities are increasingly improved, so, the time, location and learner constraints being transcended in the near future. Because of technological advances, people are now given learning opportunities in different places at home, at work or distance learning through online courses. People can study at any time they want, such as evenings and weekends, without being restricted to the regular school hours. It brings the initiative to learner especially busy people. With the above advantages, i believe learning can occur for everyone: the working people, parents with childcare responsibilities, the disabled, the elderly and children.
The main reasons for promoting lifelong education are to keep up the constant development of society and to satisfy our needs. Because of the acceleration of scientific and technological progress, reeducation seems to be an urgent need throughout one’s working life if they don’t want to fall behind their peers. It is certain that the knowledge learned in school is not sufficient for the job and life, which changes every day. Beside, Besides, some people learn to satisfy other desires, ranging from self-expression, individuality to fulfilment of their own dreams, non-vocational such as painting, music, history…
In conclusion, a combination of various factors, including the modern education, people's continuous learning needs, accounts for why lifelong education to be more and more popular.
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- Education used to be a short period of training, but today, people treat it like a lifelong practice. Do you agree or disagree? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to learn'.
Suggestion: to learn
...is true that Increasingly people choose learning throughout life. I completely agree wit...
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Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...busy people. With the above advantages, i believe learning can occur for everyone...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59420289855 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12244644672 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634057971014 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.2468015478 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.666666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134378951403 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490830149885 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049523196918 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966248575205 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437461883693 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.