Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The statement claims that governments should invest commensurate in both arts as well as military. I am of the view that government should not overlook arts as in the 21st century, it is the soft power like cinema and cultural activities that influences the world more than hard power that comes through military. having said that, I do not endorse the word "proportionately" implicitly mentioned in the statement. The proportion of the budget for military should be more than that for arts as defense is the responsibility of government whereas, arts has to have participation from both government and its people.
As claimed in the opening paragraph, improvement of arts in any country influence its soft power. there is growing importance of the "war" of cultures and ideas and not conventional "war" on borders in 21st century. The best example of such an invisible power is of the film industry. The prosperous cinema means that it is not only appreciated by the people of the host country but also globally. As a result, culture of the host nation gets globalized and influence people across its borders. In this case increase in investment by the government may increase latent soft power.
Moreover, the duty of the government is also to be concerned about the welfare of its society apart from protecting its borders. Good budget proportion for the arts may help in more enthusiastic participation of people in such activities which in turn will help in overall development of its people. but, one must also note that common people has an equal stake in development of arts. If the people are not willing to take part in it, no matter how much does the government spend in arts, it will remain underdeveloped.
However, defense is the major task to be managed by the government. there will not be two views in the proportioning of government budget between arts and military. Of course, the later one should get more proportion because unsafe borders will cause fear in the minds of people and as a result, arts could not flourish.
So, one may conclude that arts is requirement of the 21st century for welfare of the society and to exercise latent power known as "soft power" but, military is the foremost responsibility of any government even today. So, government should not overlook arts as a field that is reponsibility of only people but at the same time it should not neglect it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, apart from, as to, of course, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2059.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 409.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03422982885 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11350737605 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462102689487 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2100467545 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.368421053 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5263157895 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 5.21951772744 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150092758538 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506547170851 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474506417944 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908831824949 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465075104591 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.