Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Studying history could be important in certain fields of study but not others. Learning about the past is definitely significant in a political science class as people would be able to avoid reinstalling governing systems that demonstrated huge failures in history. On the other hand, delving into the history of discovering a medication or the evolution of a scientific method is not that beneficial. Consequently, I disagree with the opinion that history courses should be a requirement in all areas of study. I will explore more potential reasons for my view in the following essay.
First and foremost, focusing on historical events for science students would end up a waste of time, and this time could be used on subjects that matters in their careers. Knowing about who invented an algorithm or how the word itself originated is insignificant. Similarly, spending valuable time memorizing some guidelines that are no longer in use is preposterous. My own experience is a compelling example on that. While studying a clinical pharmacy course in college, we had to learn approaches to prescribing medications. These instructions get updated almost every year but the professor had to shed some light on the old version as a historical introduction. As a result, this made the lecture confusing for some students as they mixed the old guidelines with the most up-to-date ones. Hence, I believe that university courses should be centered around the relevant information only because otherwise, it could be distracting and waste of time for learners.
Secondly, most students join universities to get prepared for a career. Thus, helping students perfect the skills that they would need for the job market is more of a priority than studying history. Loading curriculum with useless uninteresting information could also be detrimental for students. For instance, I remember the topics that we had to study in molecular biology during my sophomore year. Most of the material was history about the development of the techniques. Furthermore, we did not practice any skills that could help us in the future. Although I was intrigued by molecular biology and I wanted a career in that realm, most jobs required hands-on experience with the techniques which I lacked. Had this course concentrated on teaching us the actual methods, I would have got the position that I always dreamt of.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that history should not be a requirement as some students would find it impractical and less useful to their future careers. In addition, classes should be invested on mastering abilities that would guarantee Competitive graduates.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2242.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23831775701 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02391965753 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556074766355 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1357972267 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4782608696 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6086956522 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5652173913 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240637539568 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655674312913 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615415107667 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151675330568 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443136214051 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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