Your friend from overseas is coming to visit you next month.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• tell them what they need to bring
• tell them what they will be doing during the time they are visiting
• warn them about some things that might be challenging
Dear Tom,
I hope you're well. I'm so happy that you decided spend your vacation with me in Italy.
Before you came, you should remember to buy travel insurance which will be able to cover eventually treatment cost. Healthcare in Italy is quite expensive, so even I have my policy.
I already planed everything. On the beginning we are going to stay two days in my city. You will have chance to rest after traveling and I would like to show you my favourite restaurants and pubs. After that we will go outside city, on the south, and we will be going for a walk through the mountains.
This part our trip probably will be little bit challenging for us. We are going to hiking through the hills to reach the heights mountain in Italy. Another thing which is difficult to predict will be weather, and I'm worry most about that.
Let me know if you have any questions about our plans.
Keep in touch
JF.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Tom, I hope youre well. Im so happy that you decided spen...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Tom, I hope youre well. Im so happy that you decided spend your va...
^^
Line 17, column 37, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... This part our trip probably will be little bit challenging for us. We are going to hi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... probably will be little bit challenging for us. We are going to hiking through ...
^^
Line 17, column 76, Rule ID: NEED_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going to hike'?
Suggestion: going to hike
... little bit challenging for us. We are going to hiking through the hills to reach the heights...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...llenging for us. We are going to hiking through the hills to reach the heights m...
^^
Line 17, column 216, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...fficult to predict will be weather, and Im worry most about that. Let me know...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, another thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60843373494 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31917540068 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656626506024 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4732854669 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.8461538462 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7692307692 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112000329065 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373145227959 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330860616052 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660593175416 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296845646456 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.57 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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