Nowadays many jobs are more stressful and working day is longer
What are the reasons for this? What can employers do to to help employees?
In this hour of the industrial revolution, it's quite challenging to meet the desired success in both personal and professional life. So the job market requires people to work extra hours though it is overburden to them. I believe that the increasing needs of the workforce and the competitions coming companies are the major reasons which can be solved by paying more for extra work and hiring specialists for staff promotion will serve the better.
To begin with, the major reason the modern workforce is more stressed followed by lengthy work schedule is that the cutthroat competition among the present enterprises. I'm other words, to exist in the world of survival of the fittest the business organisations have to promote the employees to work overtime with attractive wages. As a result of this, it harms the employability of the human resources followed by a lack of recreational activities and quality time with nears and dears which bring energy and enthusiasm in both personal and professional life. Finally, their management system leads the workforce to a stressful and lengthy working atmosphere.
Moreover, the higher expectations and expenses of modern life push people forward to take up an undesirable and difficult work schedule. To explain, the earning one gets from normal working hours does not help him or her to meet the basic requirements of the individual and the entire family. As a result, either they choose to serve overtime or work for different organizations on shift which help them to satisfy the increasing needs. Even it is known that many families choose both spouses to be part of the employment system which leads to this issue to its zenith.
Effective planning from the part of governments, employment owners and individuals can be the best solution for the issue. The employees can be trained on a regular basis by experts to help them to bring effectiveness in work. For example, these training motivate them to be highly patient to hit the targets in the short term, to have proper communication among superiors and subordinates and the public. Even the job owners will be happy to offer handsome payments as they get greater benefit to compete with other enterprises.
To conclude, although modern working life is highly stressful with long hours and hardworking due to competition among companies and increasing needs of individuals, it can be solved up to a great extent if they are trained well to work effectively and patiently which bring handsome earnings from the day job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, as a result, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10071942446 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85174145188 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517985611511 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7236134305 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.9375 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0625 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239777438998 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078255300279 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406148939732 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134614432161 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117735425842 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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