You have a full-time job and also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your curse tutor. In the letter
Describe the situation
- Explain why you cannot continue at this time
- Say what action you would like to take.
Dear Dr. Hany,
I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be able to attend my medical coding evening classes.
In fact, I started attending the course 2 months ago, and at that time I was thinking that I would be able to arrange my time between my morning duty and night classes. I am working as a clerk at Panda mega stores.
Since my duty starts at 7 am, I usually get to work late. The reason is that I study for the course until a late hour, which has been affecting my circadian rhythm. Consequently, I have received a warning letter from my administrator, and this can affect my long-term job stability
Therefore, according to the course institution policy, I am entitled to ask for my lessons to be postponed. In addition, I was wondering if I could take an appointment to reschedule those classes later on with the new upcoming batch.
I am looking forward to receiving your kind response.
Yours sincerely,
Randa Agha (173 Words)
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| 2019-10-31 | Randa Agha | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, so, therefore, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58720930233 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72668840127 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686046511628 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7558819875 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6666666667 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103686841559 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385368217908 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357329495424 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0565343576715 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04306472003 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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