The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing need for public to travel from home for work, education, shopping. what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is an incontrovertible fact that today traffic in cities throughout the word has become a major problem. The only best remedy to curb traffic congestion to cut the basic requirements of people like travel to home, office and shopping centers. This essay agrees to some extent with this notion and rendered other measures to control this issue.
To embark with, there are myriad of reasons why to lessen the public needs help to control traffic problem. Firstly, today daily community is not always necessary, in this technical era because, with the help of internet people can do online work, distance learning and shopping at their homes. For example, a recent survey conducted by Australian traffic authority online that 75% commuters use vehicles travel for shopping, work and home. If they would enroll in online courses then traffic injection would be decrease.
Nodoubt, it is the best way to reduce traffic problem. However, it is not universal solution for some professionals like nurses doctor engineer and police cannot do work at home. Moreover, it has many of other obstacle. To instance, people will have less freedom of choice in shopping and less social contact in their lives. This would have a large impact on society as a whole.
In conclusion, I tend out to say that to mitigate this issue people and government think more careful about facilitating public transport and uses of limited private cars in the cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...les travel for shopping, work and home. If they would enroll in online courses the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07531380753 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56953506694 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63179916318 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5980072259 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3076923077 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255766299002 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779055361746 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724857652887 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126739583431 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654489163622 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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