Many offenders are commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening and which measures can be taken to tackle this problem.
It is an incontrovertible fact that the prime crime rate has increased at an alarming rate. Majority of criminals who serve their first prison after this, are more crime committed by them. This essay examines the possible reasons for this phenomenon and suggest some policies to curb this problem.
To embark with, there are plethora of reasons why they are committing crime after their first punishment. The first is that offenders are not given a chance to keep themselves. As well as, they do not learn new skills for their future earning so that, they are doing illegal activities to fulfill their basic needs. Apart from this, they are facing some other problems in outer world. For example, the society people do not accept this type of people and everybody avoid them. In that way, they are feeling pressure on their minds and start doing crime again.
There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem often given the complexity of its causes. However, one option has to be to do counselling and give supervision to the offenders and check in place where they are back in society. The officer should give them chance to keep by learning a new skills with the help of this, they can do work after their punishment. Also, the authorities should give financial support which help to reintegrate back into society.
In conclusion, there are variety of factors that have led to make this problem worse. But, if the government take some policies such as training and counselling in the first time, they can easily sort of this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 300, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'skill'?
Suggestion: skill
...e them chance to keep by learning a new skills with the help of this, they can do work...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, apart from, as to, for example, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86090225564 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43535041677 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567669172932 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.086094167 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.2 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362792880403 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123078742706 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910013488398 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217495561403 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616244817646 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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