Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well.
Currently people attach great importance to more variety of stuff, therefore rendering the widespread discussion among the issue that whether people fails to do lots of things well because the tremendous amount of work are on the waiting list. As regards to this hotly debated topic, some people harbor the idea that it is true due to the limitation of our energy. Although it seems to be adequate and suitable to adopt the former opinion, I still strongly deem that people make plenty of excellent performances regardless of their amount.
There is no doubt that people live in of world of information explosion have to tackle a great number of work. Thus, during the time that they spend on one thing, they are supposed to take next things they may encounter into account. Facing so many things, people are likely to get anxious and worried about their phases of working and be afraid of be not capable of accomlishing them. As a result, they may enhance their working speed at the cost of things' quality. However, this statement fails to take other factors of vital importance into consideration.
In recent decades, modern technology and convenient communication system contribute to high effeciency and productivity of working. For instance, with cellphones, we can absorb mass of knowledge, such as remembering English words, wherever we are and whenever we want. Comparing to people in the past, we have a tendency to collect our free and shattered time and put them into use when being equipped with advanced tools. Therefore, we can carry out performance not only quickly but also thoroughly, leading to high-quality outcome.
In addition, harmonious atmosphere of society plays a determinate role in people's good psychology condition. People tend to be confident and open-minded than before due to the simple fact that during their childhood, they are immersed in love. Parents and teachers will provide constant encouragement and timely assistance when they meet unanticipated problems, accompanying them overcoming originally overwhelmed difficulties. People have already been familiar and acquanited with such nervous and tight situation. So psychological problem doesn't matter at all. They own the confidence to finish their tasks one by one delicately.
To sum up, although people recently have to deal more things, they can realize excellent performance because they are equipped with functional tools and great confidence cultivated from their school time.
- One of the threats to endangered sea turtle species is the use of nets by commercial shrimp-fishing boats. When turtles get accidentally caught in the nets, they cannot rise to the surface of the ocean to breathe, and they die. Some people suggest that th 3
- Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. 90
- One of the threats to endangered sea turtle species is the use of nets by commercial shrimp-fishing boats. When turtles get accidentally caught in the nets, they cannot rise to the surface of the ocean to breathe, and they die. Some people suggest that th 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ght situation. So psychological problem doesnt matter at all. They own the confidence ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as regards, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, as a result, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2101.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34605597964 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86511057162 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1347452579 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.578947368 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6842105263 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15789473684 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22536966865 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574493729284 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555887212262 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117880994104 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584064631767 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.