leader should make own decisions or that of the people
A leader is someone who represents the ideology of the people in the society.
This answer can vary for different people as it depends on a lot of factors. Concerning my perception, I would acknowledge the person as a leader if he has the potential to coincide with his decisions with the ideology of other people.
A leader's sole purpose to make the society a better place by listening to the problems faced by the commoners. For example, a farmer has a problem with his landlord as he is unable to pay up the corresponding month's rent. The farmer might be at fault. Even though the leader knows that the farmer is at fault, he has to give the farmer a chance to extend the date to repay the money.
Another quality that the leader has to possess is the ability to win an argument. For example, the government has asked the entire village to relocate due to a high way project. But the representative is unwilling to let this happen as harvesting of crops is what feeds the entire nation. Even though the leader is morally on higher ground, the villagers are willing to take this offer as they would like to start fresh as there was no proper harvest for the last 2 years. It would be easy to deny the offer out rightly but as the villagers do not know the reason they might lose the faith in him. In this case, I would call a person as a leader if he would carefully lay out the pros and cons of the change the villagers would undergo and give them the decision.
Therefore, in my view, it takes a true leader to represent the need of the people.
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- Students aged 13-18 are taught different subjects by different teachers while younger students are taught by only one teacher all day long. Some people suggest it would benefit young students to be taught by different teachers. Do you agree with this view 66
- leader should make own decisions or that of the people 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A leader' or simply 'leaders'?
Suggestion: A leader; Leaders
...with the ideology of other people. A leaders sole purpose to make the society a bett...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 291.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42268041237 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44539327644 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525773195876 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.591859089 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9285714286 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163156552537 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569922129273 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558076900341 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106726695235 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473157446043 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.