The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table provides the information about the sales in lunch and dinner in october month from monday to friday (7th to 13th). Overall the sales of dinner for throughout the week is higher than the lunch for a particular day. Moreover, the sales are high for both lunch and dinner in week days than weekends.

Firstly, sale of lunch is increasd for consicutive three days from monday. there is a slight fluctuation on thursday and friday. after that there is decrease in the sale of lunch on saturday and sunday and reaches to the lowest sale of the week $1550. Secondly, for dinner there is incresase in the sale from monday to tuesday and became constant for wednesday, after that slight difference is shown for thursday and a hike is show in friday sale and reach to hight sale of the week $4350. On weekend the sale is decresed for dinner.

In conclusion, the sale of dinner outcast the sale of lunch for whole week. The lowest sale is recorded in lunch, while the highest is recorded in dinner.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...for consicutive three days from monday. there is a slight fluctuation on thursday and...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...ght fluctuation on thursday and friday. after that there is decrease in the sale of l...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, while, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59776536313 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31171537266 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441340782123 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.6139516023 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0958637366011 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519572095438 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278901893803 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770760301392 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00729104984988 0.0819641961636 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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