Television advertising directed toward young children(aged two to five) should not be allowed.
some people suggest that involving small children with television and other media effect their childhood by addicting with them,instead of showing them television or social media we need to involve them with some sport activities. However, I disagree with this suggestion, television advertising for small children may help them by showing some stories or funny cartoon with some moral and learning for them. following two examples will illustrate this point more clearly.
first of all, When small children see something they try to understand that by observing that and try to mimic that, because of this showing advertisements with some moral
and learning help them to understand daily routine activities clearly. For example, if child see some other children doing brushing to his/her teeth that child also want to brush his/her teeth same as showing in advertisement. this kind of advertisements helps small children to adopt good habits. but sometimes seeing something that is not good for them will effect negatively on them, this is the reason most of people suggest parents should involve with children’s while watching television and other media. Watching advertising that are specially design for young children help them to understand day today activities easily and more efficiently.
Secondly, parents get information about things that newly launched in market for small children’s, if they liked and feel that things will help their child they can buy that product. Nowadays we all are see many advertisements of different product on television and other media, this is extremely helpful way to get information about new product that currently on trend. In other hand when this advertisements was not present their was no way other than visiting some market places to get information about these product. advertisements are very helpful in term of saving time of people for searching product that they want to buy and these advertisements helps many parents they want new, innovative and ease of use products for their children . therefore, advertisements helps parents to buy new things to their children.
Sometimes watching excessive television may harm small children’s health as they are not getting involved in any physical activity, so parents needs to control their time of watching television and involved with physical activities. television advertisements is good source of learning for them as they get introduced with may new things , so these good television advertising directed toward young children should be allowed.
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 58
- Television advertising directed toward young children(aged two to five) should not be allowed. 70
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ward young children should be allowed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2184.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48743718593 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93700102145 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44472361809 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5132083854 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.6 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5333333333 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217985466173 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930381250829 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890648879361 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136360055276 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850173597948 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.