You have recently ordered an item through the Internet, but you are not happy with the product.
Write to the company. In your letter:
• describe what you purchased
• explain why you are not happy with the product
• tell them what you would like them to do about it
You should write at least 150 words.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a frequent customer and member of your Gold shopping club. I am writing to complain about the wrist watch which I ordered from your website Nyka on 23rd October.
The wrist watch I ordered is an analog watch manufacture by Addidas and has a beautiful chain as per the image shown on your website. When I ordered the watch, I was assured that it was the best ever product of Addidas.
However, the condition of watch is totally opposite. Although, it was well packet, the chain of the watch was not good condition. To make matters worse, when I tried it on my wrist, the chain was broken into two pieces. As a result, I was unable to wear it on my birthday.
I logged complain on the same day to make the replacement and your company send assurance message the delivery boy will collect this watch within two days for replacement. It is extremely disappointing that I have not had any communication with them yet.
I would like to request an immediate replacement for the wrist watch. Furthermore, I would appreciate a compensation for the inconvenience caused to me.
I look forward to your prompt reply.
Your Sincerely,
Aman
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| 2019-11-05 | meetparmeet | 75 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77669902913 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7437492693 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5658477885 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2857142857 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0866215005723 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329867226545 0.0766984524023 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328513012222 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0453940319872 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253511210572 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.