Some suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university.
discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this.
it has been proposed by some people that, youth should take a break before proceeding to university after finishing school by engaging themselves in a form of employment for a number of years.this has both benefits and drawbacks and these shall be dealt with in this essay.
On the one hand, there are some benefits to the youth of taking a break before commencing university studies .Firstly, when the youth get involved in employment, this can make them a responsible young adult as they adhere to the expectations of that particular job rules and regulations. For example, they are taught work ethics such as punctuality and meeting of deadlines, this will prepare them to be responsible members of any society in future. Secondly, the money that they shall earn will aid them to cover tertiary expenses and this will be a relief to the parents. For instance, they can raise their pocket-money for food whilst they are at university or sometimes they can contribute towards their tuition fees.
On the other hand, starting off with work before attending university has some drawbacks for the young people. To begin with, there is a danger of losing interest in pursuing the university education once the youth begin by getting employment, as they end up enjoying the new job. this will make them change their mind and would not want to get a formal qualification as they would be earning a reasonable income and are comfortable with it. The other negative impact of working before gaining tertiary education is that the young persons may decide to change their planned career and want to do something else totally different from what they had passion for. when they do this, it means they are going to be doing a course that they really did not want to do. this will then mean that getting the place at the university could be a problem since their entry subjects might not be meeting the requirements and this will lead to depression.
In conclusion, there are both positive and negative effects of taking a gap year between school and university for young people and therefore a thorough consideration should be made before taking a decision on this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89159891599 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63544527288 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509485094851 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1991525773 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.416666667 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.75 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272213518573 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11006201057 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801374907674 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207209185725 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766050602496 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.