Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment.
What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?
Earth is the only planet in our solar system where life is found. The reason being among many is availability of water, the primary source of life. Today, globally we are all challenged to protect the water resources from contamination, in order to sustain the life. In this essay we would discuss few causes and affects of the water pollution on animal life and human life.
Though causes for water pollution are many, ‘diverting untreated industrial waste to the water bodies’, ‘oil spillage during shipping’ are the major contributors to the same. We live in a world of consumerism and thereby industrial mass production of commodities is rampant, which leads the companies to work overtime, neglect the policies and fail at considering the environmental impacts the untreated waste could have. Also sea is considered as the most economical mode, in transporting products from place to place. Thereby large vessels, having huge volume of capacity carrying crude oils are often set to sail in our ocean. It is found that on an average at least four to five percentage of oil spillage is acceptable as per industrial standards under ideal conditions, which is very rare to even fantasize.
The direct impact of water pollution is on the marine animals, when the natural habitat of any species is hindered, it is very obvious that their life is threatened. The number of species that has been listed in the endangered category and extinct category has risen enormously in the last century. Human being, the top most being on the food chain is also dependent on same natural resources water, air etc., as other beings, thereby any ecological imbalance created would affect the rest of the life as we are all interdependent.
Overall, untreated water and oil spill are the major causes of water pollution that effects the animal life and human beings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...impacts the untreated waste could have. Also sea is considered as the most economica...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12944983819 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81837077637 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563106796117 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6169013874 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.923076923 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22092654576 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805862363447 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848728348337 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16153415344 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863144793421 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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