Some people believe that society is becoming less friendly these days. W¬¬hy do you think this might be? Suggest some ways in which this can be reversed.
Many people in modern society are holding a pessimistic view that we do not express our polite attitudes toward others. This is due to their frequent exposure to the media, but many solutions could be applied by both individuals and the government to address the issue.
It is undeniable that the media is the main culprit of the contemporary negative belief toward the society. Thanks to the development of the internet as well as the increasing popularity of personal technological devices, people nowadays can easily access the news from various sources. In addition, since people in general are more curious about negative stories happening around, especially about traffic accidents, crime, corruption investigations, terrorist attacks or celebrities’ scandals, news outlets also are giving more of these to maximize profits via larger numbers of views, creating positive feedback and ultimately making ordinary citizens think positively less. As a result, people become more doubtful about the society and feel like it is less friendly than in the past.
However, feasible measures could be taken to mitigate the problem. On individual level, people should turn their attention toward more positive news as well as general successful development. They should also spend less time on catching latest news in the virtual world and more time on talking to real people about real life, which are proven by psychologists to help avoid ultimate pessimistic consequences like depression, anxiety or trauma. On societal scale, the government should limit the amount of negative news publicized on the internet to prevent its wide mental effects on its readers.
In conclusion, though the media is to blame for the popular belief of less-friendly society, both the governments and its citizens could take actions to reverse as well as avoid the psychological consequences of invisibly toxic information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in general, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46959459459 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93309985866 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601351351351 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.4903692757 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.181818182 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149542625847 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554876036992 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416875012589 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845713759448 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360548317115 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.