tpo 11
Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Developing the technology in our world has offered us a lot of undeniable benefits. Although, some individuals claim that these advanced activities specially internet have created some kinds of inconveniences but I do not think so. In my view, internet plays an indispensable role in our life today. I feel this way for 3 main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, regarding the issue of accessing to extended sources of information, one might suggest that today, nobody can live efficiently without internet. To clarify, last year, when i decided to attend in Toefl test, I had no certain references for being prepared. As a result, I started to search trough online books and courses. In addition, I have access to update recipes for cooking delicious cakes and various foods.
Another aspect of internet is expanding social communication with other people all over the world. For example, a friend of mine is in America now and I can not see her, but we can chat together trough social networks whenever and wherever we like.
Most importantly, having considered some kind of critical global problems, almost all people might assert that solving that special events is possible with total awareness and public cooperation. Thus, internet not only dose not make problems, but it also help us for copping them. For instance, when a real air pollution takes place in one spot of the world, All persons are concerned about it.
In all, what drives somebody to think that advantages of availability online network is gravitated to it's probably difficulties may fall in to 3 basic categories including critical need to vast and fast references of data and information, necessity of being in relation with other people and rescuing our planet from unexpected and future warning disasters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...s of information, one might suggest that today, nobody can live efficiently with...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ormation, one might suggest that today, nobody can live efficiently without inte...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t internet. To clarify, last year, when i decided to attend in Toefl test, I had ...
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...nly dose not make problems, but it also help us for copping them. For instance, when...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'real air pollution'.
Suggestion: real air pollution
...us for copping them. For instance, when a real air pollution takes place in one spot of the world, A...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, so, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, kind of, as a result, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80803608714 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663333333333 0.524837075471 126% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.4056384422 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.714285714 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 5.45110844103 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203481746258 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586158191978 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056519033595 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100413696523 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243613653803 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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