You need to seek admission in a short course. write a letter to the admission officer.
In your letter, you should:
what the course is
how your background knowledge is related to this
why this institute is important.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to get enrollment in a short term course which was advertised in the local newspaper last week.
Actually, it is Child Psychology course for duration of fortnight and one can attend it anytime as per ownconvenience. It is basically course for teachers so that they become able to tackle the students of different mindsets which in turn would be helpful to maintain discipline in the classroom.
As far as my previous knowledge is concerned,during my internship program I learnt some aspects related to psychology. Apart from this, I learnt about it while pursuing Bachelor of Education degree as well, however ,not in detail.
I would like to take admission in my in your Institute since it is renowned owing to best instructors and teaching facilities. Moreover, I can access to the institute within a couple of minutes after my work because it is just at walking distance from my home.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Maria Roy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this l...
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Line 15, column 45, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , during
...ar as my previous knowledge is concerned,during my internship program I learnt some asp...
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Line 15, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lor of Education degree as well, however ,not in detail. I would like to take...
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Line 19, column 83, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the best'.
Suggestion: to the best
...ur Institute since it is renowned owing to best instructors and teaching facilities. Mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12865497076 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97126670638 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6669560175 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4444444444 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 4.34317383033 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177079836947 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630195164493 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450009190144 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078069069835 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418622401396 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.