Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.
Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children?
Previous years many children would die because of infectious diseases which are eradicated nowadays applying vaccination, or at least are under control. There are certain people who believe that parents must be obliged to vaccinate their children, by law. On the other hand, the others highly insist that in a democratic country, individuals should be free to decide, especially about their private issues. I am going to shed some light on this debate and extend my partial support to the former view before arriving conclusion.
First and foremost, although some people believe that humankind should be free to choose, children health is an important issue about which all the society is responsible. Children are so weak and immunity system is not improved enough so that they need to be protected by adults however they are addicted parents or unaware ones who mistreat there kids. Since that these parents should be made to immunize their children by vaccinating because of which kid’s death rate is plummeted. So to ensure that our beloved children are immune and safe against conditions, protective legislation is required.
Second, it is believed that much important an issue is, considerably severer the law will be. So that, being forced by legislation, people will understand how much essential vaccinations is. Nevertheless new rules and Innovations have not been accepted by public members restrict law has helped governor’s to generalize its application. Trailer straight since people over 3/10 of vaccinating their sweet kids in Iran they would prevent their children to be immunized, despite it was a rule they refuse and that to their kids death however Amir Kabir insistence on the law and their bitter experience concluded public usage of vaccine in the country. So legislation may help people understand the importance of the subject and make the culture of its application.
To sum up, despite people are free to decide about their personal issues in a democratic country, to take care of the poor children and to expand the culture in society, the law which helps people become aware and knowledgeable is essential.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...and how much essential vaccinations is. Nevertheless new rules and Innovations have not been...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, nevertheless, second, so, at least, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2225433526 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78550948949 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580924855491 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6975992973 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.071428571 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228580229122 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836916869398 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563318300595 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138677240842 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507576318688 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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