University experience is more important than a university’s degree. Some people argue that university life is much more important than an educational degree in job market. Do you agree or not agree?
The topic of the university experience is more important than a university's degree has become a heated debate among the authorities. Although some people assert that university experience is important as this time will not come back, the others refute this proposition claiming that university degree is very necessary for future career. This easy will discuss why the university degree is far for important than experience and reach a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of arguments that found out why the university degree is a precursor for future career in which the most preponderant one is that it will enhance inter-personal skills and abilities for students. Brilliant studnets can easily find jobs in reputable organizations after completing studies than their counter peers. For instance, a study proved that 80% of the employees in top companies are the one's who have better scores in the universities. Apparently, the university degree leads to employement.
Another pivotal aspect of the factor would be that university degree provides confidence to the youngsters which help them to become more socialize. Students who have university degree are more confident than the others anf have better public relationships. For example, a recent survey revealed that all the famous players, musicians, and astronats are the people who were better in their education at the university level. Consequently, the university degree is far more important than spend time at university.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the advantages of having the university degree in terms of getting jobs and making public relation ships. Therefore, in my opinion, governments should promote such trends to fortify people for better career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, consequently, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48880597015 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93871652267 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555970149254 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0118326527 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.153846154 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380754332695 0.242375264174 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158561915573 0.0925447433944 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112599735864 0.071462118173 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233135181542 0.151781067708 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125435232673 0.0609392437508 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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