Teachers were more valued and appreciated in the past more than today.
education has been always an important concern to societies and families. Consequently, teaching and training children have been a venerable job since it prepare children for their life in future. nowadays, due to progressions in every aspects of societies, there are more regulations applied to educational system which may make teachers feel more restricted and maybe not appericiated as before. However, in my point of view, teachers are more valued and apperciated these days and I will explain my reasons in the following sentences.
First and foremost, with help of the progressions in technology, more people are informed about the importance of education in their chilren's feature. it will lead to having more respect for teachers who are training their kids. But in the past, especially in more indigent families, education was not considered necessary for a child and the first priority was to work and earn money even at young ages. Therefore, people are nowadays more grateful of teachers works because they understand its effect on properioucy of their child.
Aditionally, there were many aggresive teachers in the past, which we hear of them in old stories, which would make parents think their child is not totally safe in school and maybe harassed by an untrained teacher. In contrast, with respect to new regulations parents are now assured that teachers are well-trained and can completely trust teachers with their child's education.
On the other hand, the image teachers in children's mind is now more intimate and reliable. children more successful interactions with their teacher and want to make them satisfied of themselves. Moreover, they are asked to respect their teacher by parents and may even rewarded if they gain the teacher's satisfaction.
Taking all these into account, I believe the role of teachers in our society is more respected than before and parents strongly trust teachers with their children's training. Also governments try to provide better opportunities for teachers so as to make more people incline to this honorable job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, in contrast, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36858006042 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81700954152 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561933534743 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1557475397 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.466666667 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328317191466 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119893208517 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604448574006 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193264029379 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345647590081 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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