When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In the 21st century, due to the global technological revolution we observe that many countries showcase their strength to the world through the technology they own or develop. Many people are of the thought that, it is futile to hold-on to the older skills and lifestyle in the advanced world. I think that, we cannot generalize the statement, rather would like to have a perfect blend of modern technology with the traditional skills and lifestyle.
On one hand when we consider the modern technology replacing the traditional ones, it is impossible to weigh the benefits of the latest methods of communication with that of the older methods. With the invent of wireless devices and internet it is even possible to communicate to people in space within seconds, under a situation like this it would be regressive to hold on to the methods that were in practice in the older times like telegraph, postcard or even letter.
On the other hand, we cannot deny the ill effects of scientific development on both mental and physical health of current generation. Children are more and more becoming addictive to virtual games, youngsters are spending most of their time on social media and are depressed. Wherein, in the older days, children would spend time engaged in outdoor activities, people generally were more in touch with nature and real them, which is decreasing in today's times.
Finally, though the advancement in science has given us many benefits, giving up totally on traditional values would not be a great idea. Instead it would be wise in finding a balance between both, such that we can have the best of two worlds.
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Suggestion:
...serve that many countries showcase their strength to the world through the techno...
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...on with that of the older methods. With the invent of wireless devices and internet it is ...
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Suggestion: Finally,
...ich is decreasing in todays times. Finally though the advancement in science has g...
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Suggestion: Instead,
...ional values would not be a great idea. Instead it would be wise in finding a balance b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96402877698 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68726223005 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571942446043 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.9633899969 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0974895013073 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378959724746 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029056894845 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054565067515 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295412584648 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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