It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
For some people, they may be that owing to the fact that media are interesting in destroy celebrities’ fame to receive concern from the public, living heroes or heroines no longer survive in nowadays societies. The word ‘’ hero’’ and ‘’heroine’’ are quite obscure which need a more specific definition, but even if they are defined as icons in specific fields, my agreement with it is still with qualifications.
First of all, why the word ‘’ hero’’ and ‘’heroine’’ are too oversimplified is because we are all just people. People who do good things and bad things. Asking one to be a hero or heroine who never do something wrong is just raising moral standards to a impossible height, and this is nothing but toxic.For example, should we neglect the well known Hollywood celebrity Leonardo Dicapio’s effort in rescuing environment because he is also famous for sleeping with a dozens of actresses? If these’’hero’’ and ‘'heroine’’ actually mean people who devote and make great change, then it is clearer and may be possible.
Admittedly, it is not new news that media love to use the negative informations of well-esteemed icons to diminish their fame. This is especially commonplace in politics. Medias who are tilted to a party would be especially interested in do so to destroy the influence of parties they are against. President Tsai’s dissertation at LSE is therefore scrutinized to destroy her achievement in foreign affairs. However, this phenomenon may not be so common in other fields, which implicated that such prevalence in politics may be an exception.
Outside the chaotic political field, the connection between media and public icons are comparatively harmonious. The media would not be so insane in digging out those celebrities’ history wither because the public don’t have that much interest in the gossips or the media may rely on good connections with these people to get exclusive news. Jane Gooder may be a good example for this statement. Devoting in chimp conservation, the physical anthropologist is can be counted as one of the most important lady in academia. Reporters cray on revealing her past may receive public outrage as harassing the innocent elder, and may have difficulties to get permission for reporting her pint of view on primate conservation. These reasons may help her reputation at bay from being destroyed.
All in all, the word ‘’ hero’’ and ‘’heroine’’ in the passage is too generalized which need a clearer definition. However, except from political field, I still believes that this argument is not tenable because the public won’t buy the behavior of badgering the reverenced and the medias also don’t have other reasons to do so.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2438.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 443.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50338600451 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.14045207744 2.79657885939 148% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546275395034 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 765.9 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.3566221285 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.315789474 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3157894737 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52631578947 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0508132358995 0.243740707755 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0213616966391 0.0831039109588 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420729601107 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0338950217647 0.150359130593 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311781078945 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 100.480337079 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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