The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries.
Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions
In this present scenario,crime has become a headache of many nations but it is shocking that teenagers are also involved in this and the amount of children has incline sharply in yeaster-years. In upcoming paragraphs i will not only highlights the reasons associated with this issue but also present some potential measured to resolve it.
One the one hand ,there are an ample number of reasons why teenagers are indulging towards crime and one of then is impact of social media. What i mean to say is that nowadays, children most of time spend in front of television where they see crime movies and serials which based on real story and in this shows villan is showed a powerful man. As a result , they copy them and involving in crime. Moreover, nuclear families are also a major factor of kids which involve into bad activities. In other words, parents are very busy in their personal and professional commitments so they have no time for their off springs . Thus , teenagers are feel aloneness and end up with consuming alcohol and indulge in bad activities.
On the other hand , there are a lots of solutions to tackle with this problem. It cannot be handle unless children's mother and father to teach them tradition and ethic values which they would implement in their life. Consequently, their ethics will stop them towards crime. Apart from this, strict legislation should be made . It could create fear among children due to this they will think twice before doing any illegal activity.
Conclusion, many factors are responsible for the unlawful activities by young adults such as impact of multimedia and busy life of their parents ; however, these all cause can be handle with the provision of strict punishment along with this teach them ethics and culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, apart from, i mean, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94983277592 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58494182022 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61872909699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3976666445 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15753307242 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527999940088 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318747949722 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944745536532 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277703001996 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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