All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults.
What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?
Obesity is a growing problem in present days throughout the world which is resulting various health issues. Regardless of age i.e. both kids and adults are suffering from this common health issue. This essay will discuss different causes of increasing percentage of having unwanted weight and ways to get rid of it.
Let's check out few reasons behind rising weight among the different age groups. Firstly, one of the biggest points responsible for this is food habit that we follow nowadays. As an example, being a working individuals, mostly people skip their meals due to huge work load which leads ultimate time gap that may affect one's health badly. Secondly, following unhealthy or fast foods available in market in order to reduce cooking time. This is completely dangerous for increasing excessive weight gain. Having red meat daily basis can lead one to having unnatural weight within very short time span. Thirdly, last but not the least, we spend very less time for proper workout daily basis which can assure one to reduce extra fat from body. Daily exercise is one of the vital part to keep one's body flexible as well as healthy.
In other hand, there is a big question for every person that how to get rid of this? Mostly, people gain weight and join gym or yoga classes to keep their unhealthy living in a proper track. There are few points that we need to remind in order to tackle this common rising issue, such as:managing personal and professional life to stay healthy, following proper diet to get in shape & sharing the same awareness to others
In conclusion, people from every ages must be knowing about the facts of rising additional weight and ways to dealing with the same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87671232877 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30512157629 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626712328767 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.6250153676 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.714285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179693439835 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060939211868 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517526446304 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107986423067 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387594935626 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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