Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do there and what the food was like.
Hello Anna,
Hope you are doing well. I am extremely sorry for unable to write any letter for last couple of months due to some family emergency.
As you were always interested to hear from me about various travelling details, I just cannot wait to tell you about my last travelling story. You may consider the place for your upcoming holiday planning if you wish.
Let me tell you in details. I visited Thailand during last summer holiday. It was really amazing place to refresh your soul and mind with family. Mostly, people like you who are foodies, will love to visit Thailand. Nevertheless, Thailand is the paradise of array of street foods. We booked 5 star hotel with the benefit of free wi-fi and breakfast. If you have low-budget plan, don’t worry, you can get same benefits in apartment. Moreover, we can also enjoy various water sports in the island of Thailand. If you are not willing to get wet you can also visit to “Floating Market”.
Let us meet again to have more discussion about it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...nd with family. Mostly, people like you who are foodies, will love to visit Thailand. N...
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Line 7, column 299, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hotel' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hotels'.
Suggestion: hotels
...array of street foods. We booked 5 star hotel with the benefit of free wi-fi and brea...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79213483146 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54620848107 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679775280899 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7738682056 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.9285714286 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7142857143 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381232890149 0.216113520407 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125540195757 0.0766984524023 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999207869051 0.0603063233224 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194414752881 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105360350095 0.0580467560999 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.61 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.