Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my deep appreciation for your decision of awarding such people who render free services for the betterment of the society.
I would like to nominate Marry, my mentor. she is the director of Educator school project. Which, she has opened for underprivileged children and working very hard with dedication and selflessly to fulfill its purpose.
For the past five years, she is operating that project. Initially, she was alone. But know there are around 50 people in her team. By now, she has successfully established 10 small school units with the involvement of private people thus raising the improvement level of children.I
I would say, she along with her team is a glue, and they are working hard to hold the society together and make it safer and cohesive place. I personally believe that you should award her for her humanitarian work with a 'making a difference community service award' .
Thank you again for this wonderful initiative.
Best regards,
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...ing a difference community service award . Thank you again for this won...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25294117647 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75817645591 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688235294118 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.6216108443 44.8134815571 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142573828385 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470657007977 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642333044179 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842879632266 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655855772356 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.