Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrollment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in enrolling in a computer course. I just read about this course and I acknowledge that this course has prerequisite of an elementary course completion. Although I have never formally completed computer studies before, still I am hoping to get chance to prove my eligibility.
In the past, I wanted to study computer since very early age but because of financial struggles, I had to put my dream aside. However, my circumstances never discouraged me from studying computer by myself. I used to spend free time in library after classes and read books about programming and practicing basic skills on library computer. Also, I have developed small project using C programming language in my spare time.
Even though I never got chance to enroll in computer studies in past, I assure you I will give my best to this course and spend extra time catching up to level of other students. You will not be disappointed by my performance.
It is my sincere request to you that kindly consider my application and make an exception by giving me chance to prove myself.
Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Sincerely
Gunjan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e prerequisite of an elementary course. I have never formally completed computer ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e me chance to prove my eligibility. I wanted to study computer since very ear...
^
Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...ot chance to enroll in computer studies in past, I will give my best to this course and...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88082901554 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79206832307 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585492227979 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4159434296 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6363636364 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271591891 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103615659677 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646843192695 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15322013133 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928472183184 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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