nowadays animal experiments ae widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. some people argue that these experimets should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity
Medical health care of human has become more imperative than ever before in the modern life. Development of medicine is the important step in this feature, and animal experiments has been the main step to make sure the safety to human. Some people object to using animal as experiment because of these negative impacts to animal, in the other’s pinion, it has many benefits to humanity.
To begin with, Test the new drug in animal at laboratory is the most effective way to. see clearly the result of the medicine in general. Due to the reaction of animal is nearly similar to human. It is the best choice for scientist to measure the quality of medicine in this period. To be specific, the amount of disease or illness is reducing and there have many kind of successful vaccine, which can prevent human from different kind of viruses. In addition, the research aim to cut the painful and less harmful to animal, the meaning of animal research is humanitarian so it should not be banned.
On the other hand, some people believe that the lives of animal should be respected. Opponents of such research argue that humans have no right to subject the animal to this kind of trauma. Animal is the important part of the Earth, it has positive influence on balancing the biology ecosystems. Reducing in the number of animal has a big impact to nature, and that is why people should stop using animal as experiments.
In conclusion, I am of opinion that there should have some restriction to limit the amount of animal and using it in necessary situations.
- the graph below shows the employment rate of each gender in four countries in 2002 71
- The tale below gives information about management positions help by women in European country in 2006 75
- The pie chart show the reasons people in Great Britain had for visiting art museums in the years 1990 and 2000 85
- The table below gives information about government expenditure in five sectors relating to domestic policy in Germany Italy and the United Kingdom in 2009 49
- The pie chart show the reasons people in Great Britain had for visiting art museums in the years 1990 and 2000 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...e or illness is reducing and there have many kind of successful vaccine, which can preven...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in addition, in conclusion, in general, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56995550161 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533088235294 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0995668326 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329177926589 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107987033784 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837393618558 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195574818081 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591818988039 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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