The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree
It is suggested that juvenile delinquency, the rates of which are increasing rapidly, can only be curbed by training parents to be better at parenting. However, I believe that there are some other aspects too that must be considered while trying to reduce this problem.
As parents play an imperative role in shaping the personality of a child, their inefficiency in terms of parenting can often led to the child indulging in anti-social activities. since most of the couples are job-holders these days, they fail to spend enough time with their offsprings. Due to this, the children feel isolated and they do not acquire the fundamental social skills, morals and etiquettes, which should have been inculcated in them by their parents. In order to cope with the isolation, they turn towards social media, internet, television and sometimes, indulge in bad company and start abusing drugs. Apart from this, children, especially students, break under undue pressure from their parents regarding academic performance and to cope with the stress, start taking drugs or go rogue. Even if wards find about these unacceptable activities of their children, most of the times they try to punish them instead of making them understand politely. This further aggravates the problem, since the children often retaliate by offending even more. All this can be tackled if parents are taught parenting skills and how to deal with children.
However, parents can not be solely accused of mis-demaneaur of their children; there are others who affect the perception and the personality of the children. Other influencers can also help in making the child a good citizen.Firstly, teacher, with whom teenagers spend almost half of the day, should also emphasise on teaching moral values, ethics and discipline along with the curriculum. Secondly, since majority of the time of children is spent on T.V. and internet, and they get influenced by the activities they see on it, government should take care that obscene, vulgar and inappropriate material is not shown on broadcasting screens. Media can also play their role by spreading awareness about the consequences of committing a crime.
In conclusion, although i agree that children commit crimes often due to bad upbringing,
parents alone can not solve this issue and others must be responsible for this too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2625994695 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82366940987 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572944297082 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0837884245 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.266666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1333333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150810679803 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053022630881 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566780939096 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900495811011 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272568038472 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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