government facing issues .

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government facing issues .

It has long been subject of discussion whether the world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues or not. In my opinion, the former notion has many elements that deserve attention and I will explain this by using pertinent arguments.

There are myriad of arguments in favour of my context and the most conspicuous one lies in that governments throughout the world tackle a big problem of pollution. To explain, a recent research carried out by the Stanford University, 85% world population face enormous problems due to air pollution, water pollution and noise pollution. Apart from this, these pollutants also affect the life of habitant in aquatics and on earth. Hence, pollution is a gigantic issue in the today’s pace of life.

Another argument in favour of my view is that governments worldwide have become more active to deal with this problem. Various measures are taken by government to control the pollution. As per recent academic research carried out by the Australian Government, 75% people gained immensely from the governmental reforms with regard to pollution. Thus, steps taken by authorities to face the pollution problem positively contributes toward prosper future of the society.

To recapitulate, pollution is major issue nowadays, but by taking appropriate steps by government and relevant authorities problem of pollution can be easily tackled. Controlling of pollution leads to preservation of natural resources along with habitats.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 112, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authorities'' or 'authority's'?
Suggestion: authorities'; authority's
...priate steps by government and relevant authorities problem of pollution can be easily tack...
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Line 11, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... natural resources along with habitats.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, apart from, in my opinion, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66233766234 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04661041948 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632034632035 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7223086227 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257992222997 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924012956798 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985063038406 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163579892577 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468189977228 0.056905535591 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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