We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweigh the advantages. To what extent do you agree?
In the recent times, the advancement of technology such as the internet has definitely brought in numerous benefits. Along with these benefits, there are some threats as well. However in my opinion, these issues do not overshadow the advantages that technology has provided mankind.
The usage of technology has enabled man to lead a comfortable and easy life. In the ancient times where it took almost one or two months for a letter to reach its destination, now it only requires a fraction of seconds. The internet has also simplified many activities which were otherwise really cumbersome and tedious. For example, people can book tickets for travelling or movies, buy groceries, clothes or any useful items, transfer money to various bank accounts, pay bills of electricity, phones etc using the internet. Technology has also removed the barriers between different countries. An individual residing in the United can talk to or see another individual living in India.
Technology is indeed a blessing for human beings. However, it poses a threat to the confidentiality of the information. There have been many instances where highly confidential information was leaked, various bank account credential of individuals were hacked and they were robbed of their money. But these issues can be reduced or removed if proper safety measures are adopted. Many cyber rules and regulations have already been formed to prevent such security breaches. Also plenty of antivirus software is also available in the market to safeguard computer systems and data from any malicious attack.
In conclusion, technology advancement undoubtedly has helped mankind to progress and lead a comfortable life. Though the issues of data security are present, they do not exceed the benefits that technology has brought in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39084507042 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87077661295 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62676056338 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7074073781 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0588235294 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121010496628 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385441167901 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029848625308 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081078140661 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360646706381 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.