Nowadays most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions.
many believe that people in earlier days were more healthy as compared to the present time. The fact about the degrading strength of human beings is known to everyone and has become a matter of concern. Among the most considerable factors is the lifestyle and eating habits which we follow nowadays. In this essay, we will discuss the origin of these problems and focus on the probable solutions.
Currently, it can be seen that more number of persons are facing challenges on their health front. long ago people were able to maintain their good vitality by doing ample physical work which kept their body in motion and all muscles were exersiced. However, now people are quite busy in their professional work achieving their dreams that they have forgotten about their health. With the arrival of machines, many laborious jobs are now performed by machines while humans are left with only desk jobs just to operate them. Spending long hours sitting on the desk makes them feel more tired and also gives rise to several diseases like obesity and heart stroke. Despite the fact, that variety of fitness institues have come up nevertheless, due to hectic day to day schedule people find it diffucult to attend and continue.
Another prime reason is the kind of food we are consuming. most people do not want to cook their meals and prefer to have ready to cook or fast food in order to save some time. it's one of the key factors contributing to their ill health. Additionally, due to adultration and shortage of food, the food quality and standards are degraded than before which makes us deprived of the basic nutrients needed to complete daily work.
No doubt the challange seems tough yet there are plenty of solutions available to us now a days. due to demanding jobs, organizations can provide recreational zones with offices. Furthermore, companies and government along with NGOs can can spread the awareness about various health issues and encourage people to engage more in physical activities. people should be taught to cook their own food in a faster ways without compromising on it's nutrients.
In conclusion, changing lifestyle and paying low atention to the diet are the major causes for declining physical healh. Nonetheless, opting a balanced lifestyle and eating healthy food will makes humans physically and mentally fit again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0612244898 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54632220428 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7223961189 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113206642136 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304560947534 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321637398751 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594065644687 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244621424242 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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