Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Happiness is an extremely underrated term used to describe many feelings like tranquility, achievement, winning and peace. While there are numerous avenues to attain these human feelings, wealth is one of them. Although, happiness is relative and momentary, people relate happiness with money and materialistic things. There has always been a debate about “wealth does not guaranty happiness”. This essay shall elaborate the importance of money to be happy.
Wealth facilitates the freedom to pursue your dreams. For instance, my happiness lies in bringing and providing the best to my family. If I can fulfill their most awaited dream of traveling the world, meeting people from various socioeconomic and cultural background, I will be happy. It is only possible when I have enough money that I don’t have bother about any expenses. Furthermore, I believe that wealth gives a sense of freedom to be able to do something without worrying about the future expenses.
Wealth open the door to opportunities, to create projects, which in turn leads to the sense of achievement and satisfaction. Some people find happiness in winning or achieving their goals. For example, my partner wants to start a project green energy. This project needs huge amount of money. He has everything ready to start the project. What is stopping him is the availability of funds. Money can get his project started and that will give him happiness of contributing to the society.
In conclusion, money cannot buy happiness, but it can definitely pave the path for happiness. People how say money does not guaranty happiness, do not know where to shop.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'opens'.
Suggestion: opens
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23018867925 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94985744628 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1659307747 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9473684211 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9473684211 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141514676939 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424344023707 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400054205715 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881328760223 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362140832408 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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