A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Several individuals agree that animals are the most important part of the ecosystem and should not be killed for satisfying the selfish needs of humans, whereas, others believe in the notion that it should be legal to use animals for fulfilling a plethora of requirements such as for research and food. In my opinion, I do believe that animals have the right to live freely and should not be exploited by society.
Many citizens consent that animals are an essential part of the food chain and if they are heinously killed by people it will disrupt the entire hierarchy which in turn will affect the environment of the country, making it difficult for the community to survive. Moreover, people are killing animals indiscriminately, because of which many animals were extinct and some are on the verge of extinction, affecting the bio-diversity of the nation which is essential for human health. As species disappears, infectious diseases increase in humans and throughout the animal kingdom so extinction affect the chances of survival. To exemplify, a research report in 2008 by World Animal Protection more than 35% of elephants are killed for their ivory tusk thus, making them the endangered species.
However, some have an opinion that it is acceptable to kill animals to fulfil various needs of the society. Animals are used in research projects by scientists to find cures of several diseases which in turn has saved lives of thousands of people. Furthermore, animals are considered crucial for producing and providing food in order to satisfy the hunger of the community. Without their use their will, be no food and people will die because of starvation. To illustrate, fishes, crabs and prawns are included in daily diets of people as they are a main source of proteins essential for humans.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that god has created humans and animals and just as humans have feeling animals also have emotions and they feel pain and terror. The society should not kill or mistreat animals for their own personal benefits
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... animals for their own personal benefits
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, as for, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04411764706 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70346919249 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520588235294 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4680554811 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.923076923 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431698724102 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153108248693 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653473054534 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279857531319 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607898343792 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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