Nowadays children mostly spend their time playing computer games rather than sports.What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development.
In this modern era, toddlers mostly prefer to stay at home and spend their time on playing computer games instead of sports. This essay will discuss the reasons of this trend. It seems to me that it is
a negative development and I will discuss this in coming crumb of my writing.
To begin with, there are two main reasons that why children spend their time on computer games. Firstly, in this competitive era, money is crucial for survival. Both the parents of children doing a Job and they have a busy schedule. For this reason, they are not able to take their kids in playground for sports and the toddlers are left with only option that is online games. Secondly, the nature of parents become possessive because traffic is increasing day by day which makes the streets dangerous for kids to play. To protect their children from crowded places, parents would disallow them to go out for sports.
Moving forward,it is a negative development and has various effects on children life such as when they do not play sports and use their spare time at home, it affects on their physical development. Moreover, if kids do not play sports then they will affected by obesity and become fat. There eye sight become weak when they spend most time on computer games and also it will effect their mental development.
In conclusion, there are some reasons of this trend which I mentioned above such as safety concerns and hectic schedule of parents. It is a negative development as it badly effects the children with multifarious problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80827067669 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43957156333 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533834586466 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8933930261 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3571428571 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406181399274 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136085642477 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874217425906 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207068688712 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958579310666 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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