Nowadays most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past. What are the main causes of this situation?. Suggest some possible solutions
In the modern, world it is a fact that a lot of people have overlooked their health and fitness. Working long hours, poor diets, less sleep are one of the primary causes of people being unfit and lethargic. These issues can be solved if people make some changes to their lifestyle and dietary habits.
Stressful jobs and longer working hours have resulted in reduced vital rest to the body and mind of today’s adults. A good night’s rest is must for being healthy. Moreover, the eating habits of individuals have changed in contrast to the earlier days. Fast food, oily snacks, unhealthy foods which contains high amount of sugar, sodium, fats can be seen as staple to today’s diets. Sedentary lifestyle has led to increase in obesity of both, adults and children.
However, taking a different approach towards exercise, sleeping and eating habits will result in a positive change. According to recent studies, at least 8 hours of sleep every night is a necessity for a healthy mind. Daily exercises such as walking, running, cycling etc. can help in getting fit. Consuming healthy, home-made, organic food can result in better health. Sports events in schools and workplaces can be organized frequently.
In conclusion, recent lifestyle choices of people have caused them in being unfit and inactive. Although, a few changes can make a big difference, it will be of no help if individuals don’t take their health seriously. Corporations need to implement some changes to their policies and help employees towards a healthier and better life.
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| 2019-11-30 | Pranav Pawar | 11 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 479, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, at least, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17578125 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67931165367 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9249117377 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.9411764706 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0588235294 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0592429926404 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0214883899263 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307712584278 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425715880297 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386634816693 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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