You have an extra room in your apartment and would like to rent it out to a student.
Write a letter to the university council officer. In your letter:
- describe your apartment and the facilities available
- mention why you want to rent out the room
- say what kind of tenant you would prefer
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my interest of renting an extra room in my apartment to a student.
I have a two-bedroom apartment on the 7th floor of Alecia Building in Greater Kailash. The apartment is fully furnished, centrally heated and the kitchen has all the basic amenities for cooking. I would like to rent one bedroom with attached bathroom to a student which as one single bed, air conditioner and a study table. The bathroom has the connection of both hot and cold water.
I would like to rent the room to someone because I live alone in the apartment with no one to talk to. So, having an company will help me to pass out my time and moreover, it will not be lonely.
I would prefer to have a girl student as a tenant with certain traits such as adjusting, responsible, mature and hygienic and good in academic records. Furthermore, I would expect her to follow certain rule such as outsiders are not allowed to enter the house after 8 pm. She should not smoke or drink or play loud music as it will disturb the neighbours. The rent charged will be 800$ per month including the electricity and heating charges.
I hope that you will provide me with the assistance for getting a suitable tenant with the required qualities.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ment with no one to talk to. So, having an company will help me to pass out my tim...
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Line 9, column 382, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$800'.
Suggestion: $800
...he neighbours. The rent charged will be 800$ per month including the electricity and...
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Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Yours sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, look, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64853556485 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58708041367 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619246861925 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5271182266 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3571428571 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265951059559 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735672000487 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585165905361 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114640669741 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686395110627 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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