Some people believe that sucess in life depends on hard work and determination, however others believe that other factors lie money and personal appearance are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today's globalised, urbanised, and the over-populated world, getting success in life has become increasingly essential. There are those who say that hard work and determination are vital in order to gain success, however, others believe that there are many other factors are significant such as personal look and wealth. This essay will examine both sides of this contentious argument and provide my overall perspective.
Generally speaking, perhaps the most compelling reason why we cannot get success without hard work and determination is because of these factors are the cornerstone of achieving success. Unless we do hard work, we might no be able to get success. The result of this could be that people would fell aloneness, isolation, and alienated, which would in all likelihood lead to depression and many other problems because they would not be able to earn money in order to afford expenditures. Furthermore, with concentration and continue the practice, we can achieve anything that we want to get. For example, an eminent cricket player Shahid Afridi, who got success with the passage of time, and he used to practice on a daily basis.
Despite these arguments, there is also a case for the argument that other factors are crucial. Firstly, He can do any business, and he will get success. The importance of success to gain success cannot be denied. Secondly, they can purchase anything. This means that If people who are studying in well-renowned universities, and they are affluent, they would pay their fees, and they will achieve success. However, the people, who live below the red line cannot afford it and do not capable of getting admission in famous universities, which they want.
To sum up, This is a topic which raises strong passion on both sides of the argument. I would have to say that no matter the person has a massive amount of money, and he does not study well at an early age, he may not be able to acquire success. This is because poor education performance can have a ripple effect through the rest of the person's life. If people, who do not have skill such as communication, interpersonal, and determination of getting sucess, they could not get sucess.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ccess. Unless we do hard work, we might no be able to get success. The result of t...
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Line 13, column 339, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...a ripple effect through the rest of the persons life. If people, who do not have skill ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9864498645 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80126103798 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525745257453 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5280936003 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.222222222 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131727510227 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042574561368 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564313730048 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956016929993 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567383599541 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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