In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
People after the age of 60 years old are sent to a spesific place where they can find specialist persons to look after them; In addtion, they receive some governmental aid sometimes. This essay agrees that the expensess of caring of older people is the responsipilty of the state because those older people used to pay taxes when they were younger and mostly their sons and dauters pay taxes in the present time.
The function of the taxes is enabling the government takig money from stronger one to help another weak person. Therefore, it is fair that the governmental serveces must be supplied for the olders as a refelction of what they presented to the society and government over paying duties. For example, there is an article in the Omani constitution showes that people after 60 years old have the priority to receive governmental aid as a result of their efforts in buliding the country over the past of their life.
It is argued that enforcing offspring defray the cost of caring beside their duty toward tax-bodies that will lead to multi-responsipilty on younger people; In addtion, the rewards of taxes which have been paied by under 60 years old persons will be reflected on the older people. For more clarification, paying taxes is enough to cover all expensess of caring of grand fathers and grand mothers. In 2010, the kwauti parlement have been being discussed a bill aims to stop enforcing sons to pay for their parents, but rising the taxes rate by 9% instead and what achived at the end because 66% of members voted in favor of this bill.
In conclusion, this essay revealed that the financial needs of caring of old people must be governmental responsipilty and family responsipilty because old people had already done many things to the state and it is not fair pushing younger people paying other espensess beside taxes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87697160883 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65149415239 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520504731861 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.8159729277 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.777777778 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2222222222 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28152693643 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117501269349 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534195029901 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181650579287 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452366038054 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.