Nowadays, many people think that we should spend our youth traveling around the world. While other millennials and older generations believe that we should invest more time in studying and working, we can save the traveling and life-enjoying activities when we are retired.
How do you think about those ideas? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the present, a lot of people have an idea that young people should spend more time studying and working, we can save the traveling and life-enjoying activities when we are retired. Personally, I completely disagree with them. Because we can’t spend most of our youth for studying and working.
Nowadays, we know that studying and working are important. For studying, it is helping for our future. If you want to make your dream come true, so you should study hard. That will be your necessary for your job in the future. After you get a job, you need to work hard. It is also helpful for future and also for you family. You start to earn money which you no need help from your parents. However, you should economize. Some people they are always working through the night to earn money. They never go shopping or play, they save money for their future. That is a good way, but I don’t prefer everyone should do that. Because you should have time to rest and refresh. Traveling around the world is another for us to study. After you were working hard to earn enough money, maybe you don’t have anymore energy to play or enjoy everything they like. You spend most of your youth to earn money, so you don’t have enough time for travel around the world, experience new things that internet can’t represent.
In conclusion, for the reasons I mentioned above, I agree that we should spend our youth traveling around the world. We should make our youth be productive. Because youth is the most beautiful period on each person. Furthermore, we can’t use money to pay our youth back. So we should invest some time for traveling around the world.
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Suggestion:
...iful period on each person. Furthermore, we can't use money to pay our youth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72696245734 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40075158977 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501706484642 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3052608093 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.2173913043 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.7391304348 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5652173913 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347380543724 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122134665527 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13669783312 0.0667982634062 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.352717564146 0.151304729494 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157610173235 0.056905535591 277% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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