Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
Give details of how you and your friends or family use the center
Explain why the sports and leisure center is important for the local community
Describe the possible effects on local people if the center closes.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. Sadly, I have read in our local newspaper about halting sport and fun club of our town by local council, in terms of revenue budget.
Firstly, let me explain you in details of the importance of this center. As the center provides various facility for any age, undoubtedly majority of people in area use it . for example, I could name many of my friends socialize there to read books which are provided in center library. also my family and I use its swimming pool and gym everyday .
Besides that, you are completely aware of how sport center is vital for providing a healthy population either mentally and physically. Furthermore, there are many people who are motivated to spend their free time in the center and do some leisure activity such as searching on old articles of local newspaper or spend some time of the classes are hold in complex.
also it is essential that council save money for other troubles and situation, but it is important to preserve this center to counteract the consequences of closing it. If the closing decision being run in future. The town will face with different problems for example many adolescence and juvenile who used to gym will go to bars and drink unhealthy cocktails or the problems of sedentary lifestyle will increase rapidly. I was wondering to reveal how it would be without our useful center and I hope I could persuade you to alter your idea. I look forward to hear good news to conserve it.
Your faithfully,
Chi Chung
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 268.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7947761194 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54239499111 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619402985075 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3567990363 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7857142857 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269939553187 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781876274782 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498902659918 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136245070759 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028700539373 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.