Parenting
It is necessary for parents to attend a parenting training course to bring their children up. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is one of the difficult tasks for every parent to raise their infants. Some people believe that parents should undergo certain parenting courses to grow up their child. I think parents should learn how to bring up their child; however, it is not required for them to go for separate training classes. In the following paragraphs, let me walk you through both sides of the argument and why I feel attending parenting sessions is unnecessary.
To begin with, coaching on parenting and professional advice for parents will help them raise their child in a responsible way. The reason for taking the courses is mainly because of the lack of knowledge in growing up a child and raise of nuclear families. For example, most of this generation's parents do not know how to bath their newborn child and they completely rely on a senior member of the family, who are well-experienced in doing that kind of work. If these parents attend the classes, they can bath their infant and keep them fresh. Furthermore, today's parents are not interested in living as a joint family which subsequently cutting down all the suggestions and advice from their older family members. Hence, attending a training course on parenting will certainly help them to nurture their offspring.
However, being a parent is natural and a wonderful experience which does not require any training. Once the couple enters parenting, they will automatically tend to raise a child. It is just the confidence is required and the rests are attained gradually. Moreover, it is impossible for parents to go for training sessions as they are mostly working professionals, and allotting time for this course will add more burdens to their schedule. Also, with the availability of the internet, parents can learn all the basic things from it and in case of an emergency, they can visit the doctor.
In conclusion, I reiterate that though getting trained for child-rearing offers various benefits, it is not necessary for a parent to go for separate classes as they can learn that from their family members and the internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a responsible way" with adverb for "responsible"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...arents will help them raise their child in a responsible way. The reason for taking the courses is m...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... nuclear families. For example, most of this generations parents do not know how to ...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: TO_BATH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to bathe'?
Suggestion: to bathe
...his generations parents do not know how to bath their newborn child and they completely...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97574123989 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76667272252 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506738544474 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7228556908 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.555555556 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398067182766 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172575568167 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124949506395 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288487839948 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981903280819 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.