Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
it is argued by some that the adulthood phase comes with more enjoyment then youngster's time with lots of responsibilities; however, some people disagree on this and advocate on youngster's life. this essay believes people in teenage remain happier as compared to the age of 35-40's. this essay will discuss both the opinion with a reasoned conclusion.
young age is full of energy with fewer future goals. this because people in their teens have more time after school and college. Also, they only have a short time target to complete their course. Parents take care of their food and accommodations responsibilities, so they do not have to worried about financial issues, which leads them to live a more carefree and happy life; therefore, it is agreed that young life is the most cherishable time for individuals. For instance, the survey conducted by The times in March 2019 reported that out of 80%, only 2% of hypertension cases for teenagers were reported in Hindustan hospital.
Although some people suggest, adult life has different happiness. In other words, completing your duties, serving your nation, and helping other needy people adds a unique smile in someone's life. Despite this majority of individuals overstress themselves in order to complete their duties, which drives them to stop performing the activities, which makes them happy. For example, the study showed in Microsoft in June 209, stated that 90% of senior resources do not take part in fun activities in their offices, as they have many tasks to accomplish. Hence, the fun which individuals can enjoy in their teenage could not come back in their adult life.
To conclude, this essay suggests that adult life comes with many duties, which leads people to lose their passion. Yet, young life is full of energy with more time so that individuals could try different activities without any trouble.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16181229773 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64884705023 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0609478044 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223022202939 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845052618791 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654559472343 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141920527428 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287777721282 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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