The number of people shopping online is increasing dramatically. What are the benefits of shopping online? Are there any disadvantages?
One of the most notable aspects of modern society is the growth of e-commerce. There are those who say that online shopping has enhanced our lives in various ways, while others feel that we are worse off because of this issue. In this essay I will examine the positive aspects and drawbacks of shopping on the internet and provide my overall opinion.
From an overall perspective, there are two key advantages of using the internet to buy goods. Perhaps the main advantage of this phenomenon is that it is convenient. For example, shoppers can access user-friendly websites from the comfort of their own homes. A key result of this is that shoppers do not need to experience the stress of crowded department stores. Furthermore, online shopping is often cheaper. This is because of the fact that online shops do not need to pay rent and hire staff. As a result, they can afford to offer products at a lower price than ‘brick and mortar’ shops.
Despite these arguments there are also various disadvantages to shopping online. One particularly disadvantageous aspect of internet shopping is that users must provide personal details to the website and this can threaten their personal privacy and security. For example, hackers could possibly access consumers’ bank details and steal their money. A second disadvantage is that online shopping causes people to become more withdrawn from society. Unlike in the past, people today are spending more and more time staring at a screen and not interacting with others, which can lead to depression and other social problems.
My personal view is that if people are very careful about who they give their personal details to, and if they can find a balance between online shopping and traditional shopping, then the advantages would outweigh the disadvantages. If people use the internet wisely, it can be a convenient tool to buy the things that they need.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...line shopping is often cheaper. This is because of the fact that online shops do not need to pay rent an...
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Line 9, column 283, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...acy and security. For example, hackers could possibly access consumers' bank details and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, so, then, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09779179811 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75708696372 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561514195584 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1600000613 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0588235294 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236329328545 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847912627492 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099079515929 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147356437222 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365842594242 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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