environmental problems such as pollution and climatic variations are increasing nowadays. the government have take some measures at a global level. but they only get few solution. why is it so? how can this problem be solved?
Our mother earth is damage because of some major cause. Nowadays a lot of human activity harmful to the environment. even though some global solution has been addressed to solve these solutions. The government made some policies to restrict human activity, but in this, some are not effective on people.
There are several reasons to save the environment. In this era, all products are created in plastic and this is a danger for the environment. in illustration, the government ban various reusable plastic products and use clothing bags for personal use. Secondly, our Simulation change because of the high use of your private vehicle. this effect only in the long run. as a result, we suffer poor air quality and global warming. Another reason is that people make money more and more and the industrial area develops. These industries are causing harm to the environment by releasing gas on air without filtering or releasing chemical water in a river or ocean. The lack of implementation is the main reason we still have pollution and increased earth temperature.
Some possible ways to make this planet clean and responsible. For this to occur sharing vehicles among the same destination people and the government will put some transportation system at a reasonable rate. People are not about what will happen in the future they use a plastic bag this cheaper than other products. That's reason why the mission of the government failed. The government strictly changes policy for industries and changes the timing of leakage gas in the Atmosphere.
To bring the curtains down, the Government takes such rules this will easily accept by people. we will give a proper response to implement rules and regulations of government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...an activity harmful to the environment. even though some global solution has been addressed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, secondly, so, still, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11929824561 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76893909279 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585964912281 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5010169316 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.95 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19028556377 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552648155999 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394683243587 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110918829276 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231714036615 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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