you have enough money to purchase either house or business. discuss both sides and give you own opinion
If I had enough money to choice between bay a house or a business I will choice a business. Business may be succeed or fail but a house clearly it won't improve. In additional you can by the house in the future.
Business could be succeed or fail however, you should put positive idea, you should say my project will be the most successfully project in this world. In the world no one start his or her project with knowing if his or her project will be succeed so you haven't to worry about the future you have to enter to this a adventure.
A house freeze the money. It don't make it develop. Such as if you want sell house you bought it before 5 year you can't sell it more than you bought it. Maybe you can sell it with the same salary so, your money will be less than before .
You can build your dream house in the future after you develop in this world .after you have your own business, after you be the famous business man. I know many men they before few year they have only small house now they have paste villa in my country. All that as a result for they thank positives and they chaired beginning with a business.
In the last, I will start businesses before buy a house because I can bay my dream house in the future after I do my own business.
- some people prefer to gain information from their experience. others prefer to gain information from books discuss both sides and give your opinion 61
- some people prefer to allow their children to watch TV in any time, others prefer to limit the time for only one hour discuss both sides and give your own opinion 56
- The number of people shopping online is increasing dramatically. What are the benefits of shopping online? Are there any disadvantages? 56
- Countries around the world require more and more energy every year for domestic and industrial use. What are the causes of this excessive energy consumption, and how does it affect the environment 67
- some people prefer to gain information from their experience. others prefer to gain information from books discuss both sides and give your opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
If I had enough money to choice between ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l you can by the house in the future. Business could be succeed or fail howeve...
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Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...s or her project will be succeed so you havent to worry about the future you have to e...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ut the future you have to enter to this a adventure. A house freeze the m...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou have to enter to this a adventure. A house freeze the money. It dont make i...
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Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'freezes'.
Suggestion: freezes
...er to this a adventure. A house freeze the money. It dont make it develop. Suc...
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Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e. A house freeze the money. It dont make it develop. Such as if you want se...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...l house you bought it before 5 year you cant sell it more than you bought it. Maybe ...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... so, your money will be less than before . You can build your dream house i...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your money will be less than before . You can build your dream house in the fu...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e future after you develop in this world .after you have your own business, after ...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'few years'.
Suggestion: few years
...siness man. I know many men they before few year they have only small house now they hav...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y chaired beginning with a business. In the last, I will start businesses bef...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.16326530612 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10227066272 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481632653061 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.0 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2193863228 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4615384615 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32183880797 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127268089194 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800624904865 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18871913951 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559103821632 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.0946893788 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.85 12.4159519038 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.4 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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