Nowadays people use different machines and devices to do housework. Do you see it continuing as a trend? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Today different kinds of electronics are used to perform home duties, such as cleaning or cooking. Some individuals assume it is beneficial, however, others do not agree. In this essay, I will explore both views and offer my own opinion.
On the one hand, the usage of technology saves people’s time, hence allowing them to perform other duties, such as spending time with families or doing sports. Statistics says that a great proportion of families that use these types of appliances are content with the purchase since they have more time for other tasks. Moreover, devices are simple and convenient to exploit. Some electronics can be initiated by pressing a few buttons. For example, a washing machine can be launched by selecting the needed mode and pressing the start button and can be launched in a minute.
At the same time, electronic helpers are rather expensive, therefore it is not worth buying them. Instead, people can clean their houses by themselves and economize. To illustrate, low-income families do not have enough funds to spend on exorbitant machines to do the housework, thus, they do the chores. Furthermore, some individuals can get lazy because of the daily use of appliances. Rather than exercising during cleaning, they prefer to spend their time in front of a computer or TV while the vacuüm cleaner robot is operating for them.
In conclusion, I suppose that using electronics to perform housework will remain to be a tendency because many aspects of life are being robotized today, making people’s lives easier, so they have spare time for hobbies or pastime. Although technologies are costly and individuals become less physically active because of them, I believe that they are irreplaceable for households, as they save time and are handy to use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14965986395 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81740260096 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605442176871 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8604031599 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.933333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159601006015 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535386577154 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573743415566 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102398759438 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340711083078 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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